
Star Fall: Harbor Pals — Something Under the Dock
Begin reading →Something Under the Dock · Story & cast
Something beneath the quay is making a very strange noise. Pip wants a closer look. Koa thinks there is an ordinary explanation.
Starring
Pip. Curious and eager to contribute, with an eye for the view others miss.
Koa. A resourceful pirate with practical skill and dry warmth.








The End
A little mystery solved. A quiet moment shared.
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The Long Way Round · Another Harbor Pals adventure.
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Read credits and licenses
Created for: Star Fall / CTSoftwares
Illustration and lettering: Assisted by OpenAI image generation
Character portraits: Existing Star Fall reference artwork
Typefaces: Barlow Condensed · Source Sans 3 — SIL Open Font License
Edition: Reading candidate 1 · November 2,2026
Fonts: Barlow Condensed · Source Sans 3.
Panel-by-panel transcripts
Read panel 1 transcript
Narrator: The quay was quiet. Almost.
In the scene: Pip and Koa reach a quiet stone landing beside the harbor. A bench and a hanging landing net stand behind them.
Read panel 2 transcript
Sound: TOK
In the scene: A hollow knock from below the quay catches Pip’s attention.
Read panel 3 transcript
Pip: There it is again.
In the scene: Pip and Koa look over the railing toward the sound.
Read panel 4 transcript
Koa: Something loose?
Sound: tik
In the scene: Koa tests a railing fitting, which makes a small rattle.
Read panel 5 transcript
Sound: skrrk
Pip: The scratching’s coming from below.
In the scene: Pip notices a different scratching sound coming from beneath the quay.
Read panel 6 transcript
Koa: Then let’s have a look.
In the scene: Koa joins Pip in taking a closer look.
Read panel 7 transcript
No new dialogue or narration.
In the scene: Pip moves to a clearer viewing position along the same railing.
Read panel 8 transcript
No new dialogue or narration.
In the scene: A dented open tin hangs low beside a timber pile on a loop of cord.
Read panel 9 transcript
Pip: A tin. There’s something inside.
In the scene: Pip points out the tin and the sound coming from it.
Read panel 10 transcript
No new dialogue or narration.
In the scene: Koa sets her tricorn on the dry stones beside the bench.
Read panel 11 transcript
No new dialogue or narration.
In the scene: Koa takes the landing net while Pip watches the tin.
Read panel 12 transcript
No new dialogue or narration.
In the scene: The timber pile blocks the net’s direct approach.
Read panel 13 transcript
Koa: Can you see the other side?
Pip: Yes. There’s room there.
In the scene: Koa asks what Pip can see on the far side of the pile.
Read panel 14 transcript
Koa: Guide me.
In the scene: Koa draws the net back, ready to follow Pip’s guidance.
Read panel 15 transcript
Pip: Around the post…
In the scene: Pip guides the net around the open side of the pile.
Read panel 16 transcript
Pip: There. Underneath.
In the scene: The net passes underneath the tilted tin.
Read panel 17 transcript
No new dialogue or narration.
In the scene: The net takes the tin’s weight and the cord slackens.
Read panel 18 transcript
No new dialogue or narration.
In the scene: The supported tin rises clear of the timber spur; the freed cord hangs beside it.
Read panel 19 transcript
Koa: Got it. Good eye, Pip.
In the scene: Koa acknowledges Pip’s help. A tiny claw peeks inside the tin’s rim.
Read panel 20 transcript
No new dialogue or narration.
In the scene: Koa brings the loaded net over the railing onto the landing.
Read panel 21 transcript
No new dialogue or narration.
In the scene: Koa grounds the net while Pip watches the opening with curiosity.
Read panel 22 transcript
No new dialogue or narration.
In the scene: Koa lifts the tin out of the net, supporting it with both hands.
Read panel 23 transcript
Pip: That was you?
In the scene: Pip discovers a tiny shore crab inside the tin.
Read panel 24 transcript
Sound: skrrk
Sound: tok
Koa: Quite a racket.
In the scene: The crab scratches the metal, explaining the noise that started the investigation.
Read panel 25 transcript
No new dialogue or narration.
In the scene: Koa lowers the tin’s open rim close to the dry stones.
Read panel 26 transcript
No new dialogue or narration.
In the scene: The small crab walks out of the tin.
Read panel 27 transcript
No new dialogue or narration.
In the scene: Koa sets down the empty tin after the crab is clear.
Read panel 28 transcript
No new dialogue or narration.
In the scene: Pip puts the recovered tin and its cord at the far end of the bench.
Read panel 29 transcript
No new dialogue or narration.
In the scene: The crab turns toward the nearer shade beneath Koa’s hat.
Read panel 30 transcript
No new dialogue or narration.
In the scene: The crab slips under the tricorn’s brim.
Read panel 31 transcript
No new dialogue or narration.
In the scene: Koa notices a small claw and pauses before touching her hat.
Read panel 32 transcript
No new dialogue or narration.
In the scene: Koa and Pip meet each other’s eyes with shared amusement.
Read panel 33 transcript
Koa: I can wait.
In the scene: Koa chooses to sit and wait; Pip turns to join her.
Read panel 34 transcript
No new dialogue or narration.
In the scene: The pals share a quiet seat beside the occupied hat, with the recovered tools and tin set aside.